Throughout the construction of our promotional music video, the production team and I kept analysing the various elements in music videos to relate to ours so that we are using the conventions for music videos in our pop/rock music genre. I personally, noticed that in Avril Lavigne's music video ''Sk8er Boi", she uses various aspects which were used in the creation and development of my music video, which also helped us to make final decisions:
- There is the use of an urban area which is made apparent in outside shots to establish the setting.
- There is a narrative throughout the music video, which is to do with boyfriends/girlfriends/relationships.
- Characters are of the same age (teenage)
- There is the use of teenage stereotypes such as the ''grunger/goth/skater boy'' and the fashionable and popular girl, who could also be stereotyped into the group of ''cliques''
- The ''skater boy'' wore dull, black clothing, which helped us to come to a final decision that black would be the best colour for the ''goth'' in our music video. This was made apparent in society within the stereotypes, and this particular music video reconfirmed this.
- This music video shows youth like behaviour such as messing around with cars and acting animal like in the street, we related the theme of showing youthful behaviour in our music video by releasing it through the youthful and fun side to relationships instead since that was what our narrative was based on
- The lyrics during the music video syncronize with the narrative through having scenes which reflect the lyrics narrative, for example ''he was a punk, she did ballet, what more can I say?''. During these lyrics scenes consisting of the ''punk'' and the ''clique girl'' were present, we also did the construction of our music video in order to make the storyline as unambiguous as possible.
As the music video tends to attract a wider range of female audiences opposed to make, I initially set out to gain an audience of equal males and females. Therefore, by doing this, I thought that the music video could attract mainly the females whereas my digipak and magazine advertisement could attract the male audience to balance out the male and female audiences. The colours used in the digipak and magazine advertisement are less vibrant than what would be expected when viewing the music video, therefore contributing to the attraction of a male audience. However, the use of the symbolic imagery of the guitar helps the digipak and magazine advertisement to collaborate with the music video as the music video is quite 'rocky'.
Also, there was the use of similar texts throughtout the digipak and magazine advertisement. This, of course, did not make an appearance in the music video, however I thought that the font 'impact' which I used was bold and captivating and held a sense of authority with the boldness. Also, the outline holds connotations of lightning, which relates back to the name of the band. Additionally, I thought that this particular font could help contribute to enhancing the music genre, as rock music is at times outstanding and is noticed straight away with the sounds of the guitars, therefore I thought this font illustrates this relatively well.
Furthermore, on the magazine advertisement, there is a range of different sized fonts, more so than the digipak. I thought that this could relate to the different camera shots in the music video as the production team and I made use of long shots, mid shots, close ups and others. The audience may not necessarily relate the different sized fonts to the camera angles, however this is what I intended when changing the size font in the different phrases on both the digipak and magazine advertisement.
Lastly, the grey background colourscheme on both the digipak and magazine advertisement is very plain and simplistic, however with a feel of freedom due to the wide spacing. This, I intended on illustrating the freedom in which the female protagonist character had in a patriarchal society. This illustrates the sense of power and freedom which is emphasized throughout the music video, especially with the wide amount of spacing on the digipak and magazine advertisement.
We used this effect to end the music video to represent that the relationship was ongoing even though the music video came to an end. This is an editing feature which the group and I witnessed when doing further research on music videos of our genre. For example, in 'Sk8er Boi' by Avril Lavigne, this editing technique was present.
- Speed...
In many areas throughout the music video, the speed was always being altered. This was due to the powers and excitement of the marvel comics being expressed in our music video to recreate the feeling of 'Superman'. Also, this generally, at times, helped to make the clip move at the same pace as the music lyrics. Also, this editing technique was not a common feature for our music genre, therefore we are challenging the conventions of pop/rock.
- Cartoon...
We again, made much use of the cartoon effect as this portrays the narrative of the Marvel comic books, especially that of 'Superman'. We also made use of this effect in certain unusual scenes, such as sccenes that contain unconventional camera movements such as the scene where the 'Superman' is on the roundabout and is spinning rapidly. This could also relate back to the powers of 'Superman' from the comic books.
To generate the audience feedback for the outcome of our music video, the production team and I thought it would be a constructive idea to video record the people we wanted to gain feedback from. We gained feedback from 6 people in total of which were 3 girls and 3 boys. We were unfortunately unable to video record the 3 boys as we could not see them in time, so we made use of the girls as the team and I see them everyday. We asked 4 main questions to our candidates. They were:
1 - What do you think the genre of the music video was?
2 - What were the best aspects of the music video?
3 - What were the worst aspects of the music video?
4 - What is your overall view?
Here are the answers from the 3 female candidates:
What I have learnt from the audience feedback from a girls point of view:
The main area of focus when it comes to the aspects of improvement, I have come to realise that a problem in which the female candidates have noticed is that a few scenes were grainy due to poor lighting. Therefore, as a result, some scenes may not have come out as best quality as hoped. Thus, if I were to make any adjustments to this project if I had extra time, then I would reassure myself that all scenes were of a high quality appearance and that the lighting would contribute to this reassurance.
Another aspect which I have come to realise is that the production team and I did well when it came to creating the narrative for the song lyrics. Additionally, they appeared to have liked the idea of the archetypes which added humour to the narrative and the music video as a whole.
Here are the responses from the 3 male candidates who answered the same questions as above:
Male candidate 1:
"I would suggest that the music genre was Pop."..."I liked the way in which the men were made more humorous due to their characters, and I also enjoyed watching the narrative as it was engaging"..."I would say that the scenes could have been filmed a bit more steadily"..."I personally would say that the music video is very good and I was impressed".
Male candidate 2:
"I'm guessing that the music genre could be between pop and rock"..."What I found a good aspect was the way you related the name of the song 'Superman' to the costumes of the two main characters"..."I did not like the scenes in the park as it appeared a very typical environment which was not that surprising"..."Overall, I did enjoy viewing the video but the scenes did not surprise me as it was filmed in areas I expected".
Male candidate 3:
"The genre I would say is definitely pop."..."The aspects I thought were good was the characters costumes as it made me laugh and made me want to carry on following the narrative."..."Something I did not find that good was the quality of certain scenes as it appeared fuzzy and the lighting was dimly light which made it difficult to see characters at times."..."Overall, I enjoyed watching the video and I would view it again."
What I have learnt from my audience feedback from a male point of view:
I have come to notice that the aspects in which the male candidates did not particularly take a liking to was the quality of the filming as certain scenes appeared fuzzy/grainy and at times unsteady, this was a response which was quite familiar within the female audience. This shows me that this was a noticeable factor which I would have changed if I had more time to edit the music video.
I have also come to realise that a factor which was popular among the male audience which they enjoyed viewing was the way in which we developed the archetypes in society through the use of costumes. This was another aspect in which the female candidates have picked up on, therefore this shows that the production team and I did this very well.
By showing the class the music video, suggestions from the students were made for some audience feedback before completing the absolute final stages of the production. For example, the lip syncronization of when the protagonist female character was singing along to the lyrics was not exact. Therefore, we decided to delete certain areas of the protagonist lip syncronization and replaced it with clips of Superman as we found it a problem trying to create the lip syncronization in the exact timing with the lyrics as when it was filmed, it was an estimated guess how quick to sing the song instead of having the song playing in the background to make it precisely exact. On the positive side, the added in clips of superman fitted in nicely as it corresponded to the lyrics ''...he's superman...''. This helped us to develop and challenge conventions of the pop/rock genre as generally, this music genre usually consists of the protagonist lip syncronizing, however by inserting additional clips in these areas challenged these conventions to make our overall outcome of the video better.
Additionally...
I gave the candidates options as to how many panels they believe would be most suitable for a digipak. By looking at the graph, it is clear to see that the majority of people would say that 4 would be most suitable for a digipak, 8 people agreed with this. However, 6 other candidates voted that 6 would be a more suitable amount for a digipak. In result to this, I have decided that as there is not much difference in the statistics showing how many voted for a digipak consisting of 4 or 6 panels, I will make my digipak consist of 6. The reason for this is because in my research of digipaks, it was very rare that I came across a digipak consisting of 4 panels as the majority of them had 6. Therefore I am going to conform to the generic conventions of digipaks when in the process of creating my own.
Also, this graph shows that the majority of people would prefer bright and bold colours opposed to dull colours. I think that this would be very convenient when relating this back to my music genre as bright and bold colours stand out the way in which our song stands out to all people,including those who aren't really into the pop/rock genre. For this reason, this links my digipak in with my music genre.
I also had answers generated from other questions such as 'What grabs your attention on an album cover?'. The majority of people voted for bright colours and only a minority voted for a photograph of the band or artist and graphics. However, I am still going to try and attempt to somehow include a bit of everything to make my album cover have a more varied image that could relate to the minority as well as the majority.
Moreover, another question that I found relevant that I generated answers from were 'What are you mosty likely expecting to see on a Pop/Rock album cover?'. Out of the options of 'symbolic imagery', 'photograph of band/artist' or 'graphics', a high percentage voted for symbolic imagery which I thought would be an option I would chose if I was to not conduct a questionnaire. In result to what would attract a major audience, I am definitely going to choose symbolic imagery as a way of creating my digipak. However, I am still going to attempt taking into consideration the minorty by considering graphics and photography of my band or solo artists as a means of making my outcome appeal to everyone and not just the majority.
Another use of special effect which we put to use was the 'reverse and speed'. We used this when the female character made up her mind on who was her 'Superman'. Therefore, we used this special effect of 'reverse and speed' to make it appear that all the other male characters were going back to where they came from so that the intended 'Superman' is the one singled out to be the main male character. Also, we found that as this particular special effect made everything appear fast moving, it was another aspect which helped to keep the audience engaged and keep their mind occupied with the narrative because if the narrative was slow moving, then the audience would easily lose interest.
Here are a few examples of the special effect of 'reverse and speed' being put to use.
A further transition which was in fact very vital for the narrative of our promotional music video was the 'cartoon effect'. Not just did we use this effect due to the fact that some of our clips came out dull and grainy and this effect helped to brighten them up and physically appear clearer, but it also related back to the original storyline of 'Superman' and the cartoon comic books. This special effect did admittedly come out similar to the dream effect, however this was thought to be a positive aspect because it added on to the cartoon and childlike feel, plus it could be considered to represent the female characters thoughts.